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Me and My Mommy by Pikapetey Me and My Mommy by Pikapetey
I pray no one ever has to experience this. I know this pain. This pain of loosing a family member (my sibling and best friend in life) and watched what the loss did to my own mother, and it never really leaves you.

*NOTES FROM THE ARTIST*

This was thee HARDEST comic for me to make and I think will be the hardest for a long time. I had to recall a lot of unwanted memories so I could get the acting choices down in with Derpy and Twilight. I was not expecting the emotions that followed and had a similar breakdown. I hope it shows through with the characters and poses I chose. I am emotionally drained, and am in dire need of sleep. Goodnight.
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:iconx8att0sa1x23x:
Wow... just wow... I did actually cry when i read this. When first reading it I thought i would be reading a cute and happy story. But its ok that you did this. No Dinky being dead is not ok. But it adds for the very emotional ending. Enough of an impact for me ,a grown adult, to shed a tear or two. That is beautifully sad. As for the art itself the first coulpe of panels were perfect in representing the vision and look of what you find in a little girl or in this case filly. The last two panels were also good. although Twilights snout is a little awkwardly square. Well done man!
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This is a powerfull one, sincerely. First time a picture/ comic make me cry. The way it's drawn have a huge impact on the feelings, mostly, for some reasons, with the muffins. They are drawn in a so simple way... it's hard to explain. and the water droplet on top of "momy" is really what made me burst into tears.

I gave you 4.5 stars for technique because the ponies look strange... Mostly with Twilight's nose and Derpy's human-looking face. It kinda ruin the emotions a bit, but I still cried.

If I could, I'd give you 6 stars for Impact.

Sincerely, Good work!!!
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LargeFG777 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2015
I have to admit, I actually kinda had tears when I saw those last two drawings and realized what this was about. And that's saying something considering I'm not really someone who's prone to crying a lot. I'm mostly really serene about sad moments, but I do get the usual tears of joy from an absolutely heartwarming moment.

So I gotta say, you really freaking did it, hombre. Because to me, there's nothing more tragic than a child dying so early and not even knowing about it. Like seriously, those last two drawings really hit me.
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Monkeyrofl901 Featured By Owner May 19, 2015
And the tears flow...
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JustInItForComments Featured By Owner May 18, 2015
I suspected Dinky was showing these to her teacher. Unfortunately, when it turned out she was dead, I cried every time.
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thetrueCrystalVixen Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
This hit me hard, not that I have ever had a daughter. This is just similar to myself and my mother; she was sick for 4 years and passed away when she was starting to get better, she caught pneumonia.
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damonika2009 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015
Ouch! Man that ending just punched me in the stomach. Poor Dinky. Brave little girl to the very end. *Hugs Derpy*
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bluefoxycat Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The Doctor won't be happy about this at all.
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mobius22 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014
Yes!!!!!1
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sonicnarutoauthor Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014
sh...shit...I think...that is the most heart breaking thing ever
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Star-Von-Alicorn Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
awwwww rip dinky Crying Cry emote Cry run Cry 
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:iconstar-von-alicorn:
Star-Von-Alicorn Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
awwwww rip dinky Crying Cry emote Cry run 
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TheREALTwilightSpark Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Dinky had terminal illness?


Oh, I"m so sad now!
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mlpfan1982 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
there are tears in my eyes :( r.i.p. dinky
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MisterPetey Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
Geez
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Kittamaru Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Oh my God... I am so sorry that you had to experience that, truly I am. 
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PinkiePieHime Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
i think that Dinky went to the hospital
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sweetpeaC Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
tes she did and didnt survive sadly :(
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:iconambenthal:
ambenthal Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013
Poor, poor Dinky....Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! 
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WolfSamurai7 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sequel.Draw.Happy ending.NOW!!
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:iconwolfsamurai7:
WolfSamurai7 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
(Tearfully) Sequel. Draw. NOW!!
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:iconpikapetey:
Pikapetey Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
she's still dead.
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WolfSamurai7 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
But it can't end like this! Dinky was one of the few good things in Derpy's life! All her life she's been ridiculed for her eyes,then Dinky comes along and refuses to judge her,and apparently others take her cue. And now you go and kill her off? You ought to be ashamed.
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Fundz64 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ow!
that hurts! too close to home-

hope you and your family are doing better though!
'bless
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sniper44133 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DR.BWON
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silverlunawolf6 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
And as I read this, my music stopped. I think I may need to go cry a bit.
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srbarker Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I came hear after watching a "dramatic" reading of this comic. www.youtube.com/watch?v=ezbMsW…
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FruityAdoptables Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Artist
I had to face it. First 2 of my rats, named Hauna and Analeigh, and my cat, Eclipse. I feel your pain, Derpy. *hugs Derpy*
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truecere Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
THE FEEEEEELLLLLLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS  MY HEART MY CHEST
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greencarrot01 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww, I really wish i knew what happened to Dinky.

Really sad...
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truecere Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
dead
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:icongreencarrot01:
greencarrot01 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I figured, but I didn't know how
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:icontruecere:
truecere Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
cancer or something
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greencarrot01 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, ok. :,(
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truecere Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
suuuuu sad
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greencarrot01 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
agreed. :,(,
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kamakane Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
this reminds me a tiny bit of the derpy themed tumblr I am doing right now. very well wrote and plenty of feels.
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truecere Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
link me the tumblr
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rainbowcrash58 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
this brought tears to my eyes, but well done.
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DeathPaladin Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
I've spent 24 hours trying to figure out what to say to Derpy in this post... I can't think of anything. So... (pulls her into an embrace). I won't.
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ribbon13 Featured By Owner May 30, 2013
Dinky died of Leukemia? That's no bueno.
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Advenit647 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WHYWHYWHYWHYWHWYHWYHWYHWYHYWHYWHYHWYHWYHWYHWYHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHY
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truecere Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
YOU FOR GOT WHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYHY
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muffychan83 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know it's supposed to be sad but the face of the end are really...funny
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JustInItForComments Featured By Owner May 18, 2015
It's called Narm.
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Northwestcore Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Didn't expect that......... :'(
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kildeez Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
I'm cool. I'm good. Really, I'm...I'm...

:crying:
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truecere Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
NAW MAN BE STRONGBE Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! 
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kildeez Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
WHY DID YOU REMIND ME OF THIS AFTER THREE MONTHS!?  :cries:  
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colgatetail Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What happened to her?
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PokeFreak33 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
she died.
i dont know how, but she did
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